How to slap up your response doing almost zero work

Would you like to get valuable feedback on your copy, without the normal time and monetary investment it usually takes to get me on your team?
 
If so, check this:
 
Until tomorrow, Friday, July 3rd at 5 PM PDT, I am offering a small number of Conversion Boosting Copy Critiques.
 
Here is the deal:
 
For the measly fee of $284, you can get your copy critiqued by me. This includes up to:
 
10 emails
1 sales page
2 opt-in pages
Or a combination of the above (5 emails + 1 opt-in page... A sales page lead + 5 emails... etc)
 
[If you need more copy than that critiqued, or have specific needs, simply email me letting me know and we can work out a deal]
 
In your critique, you will get: 1) Notes in a Google Doc, explaining the exact areas your copy is boring, unbelievable, off-target, or any way hurting your response and why (you will have these notes to refer to so you can implement your new skills in all your future copy). 2) New ideas for headlines, subject lines, leads, call-to-actions, and other “key” parts of your copy. 3) A short video of me walking you through the critiques so everything is in crystal-clear technicolor. All for you to keep and save and return to for as long as you wish.
 
I should note: I will NOT be rewriting your copy entirely from scratch. I will be critiquing your copy. So while I may have ideas for headlines, subject lines, and more (and yes, I will write those ideas down for you to play with and run as your own); and while I believe my feedback will likely boost your response enough to pay back your investment many times over with you doing almost no work at all, if you need your copy written from scratch, this isn’t the right service for you.
 
With that out of the way, here is what my last critique client said about this process:
 
"Tyler, your advice on my email and landing page was phenomenal. You really understood my target audience and what I was looking to accomplish.
 
I knew my copy was pretty good, but your copywriting skills made it great! Your experienced eye saw things I was just too close to my own business to see. Thanks. Job Well Done!"
— Henry Mittelman, Top CEO Coach and Forbes Council Member
 
To reserve your critique , go to the link below and pay in full before the Friday 5 PM PDT deadline. After you click the link and pay the nominal $284 fee, you will receive an email with details and next steps:
 
www.copybymccune.com
 
Tyler McCune
 
P.S. I will ask you to fill out a short questionnaire before your critique in order to better understand your market, offer, goals, etc. This questionnaire is the abridged version of the questionnaire I give to every new client (which I have been told is quite valuable and worth money in and of itself as it forces you to get clear on many important aspects of your marketing).
 

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